Comments on: A Narbonic Dream

By: Ralphm Erridew (ralphmerridew)

Ralphm Erridew (ralphmerridew) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:28 +0000

Does anybody else here read / been illustrated in Slow Wave?

By: Kathy Moon (flipkat)

Kathy Moon (flipkat) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:27 +0000

I think her hair's standing on end from the shock.

By: Ed Gedeon (eddurd)

Ed Gedeon (eddurd) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:26 +0000

I noticed a couple of cute details that Shaenon added … such as the gerbil tail on Mell’s graduation mortarboard in panel 4. What I can’t figure out is panel 3 … apparently Mell has mugged Kid’n’Play, and stolen their hair?

By: Jon Stout (brasswatchman)

Jon Stout (brasswatchman) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:25 +0000

@Leon – Not to mention the fact that it could very easily fit in with the final reveal about Dave.

By: So It Begins (soitbegins)

So It Begins (soitbegins) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:24 +0000

Very neat.

By: Leon Arnott (l)

Leon Arnott (l) — Wed, 08 Jul 2015 21:00:23 +0000

This is a pretty good Narbonic storyline. It’s got plenty of stuff that isn’t covered in many other stories: external anatagonists, Mell getting suckered, and a climax so awe-inspiring that to actually attempt to communicate it would do it the greatest injustice. And, of course, Dave getting the losing end of the laser beam twice in succession.